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J’ai Faim/J’ai Soif

Tim Wildes

Outside of town – about 43 miles,

a man was found.

Evidently, he had walked here,

presumably unable to find his destination.

Leaning against a tree,

the man’s figure was unnatural,

uncomfortable to one’s regard.

His skin blends of grey and red,

his forehead peeling away.

The sun hadn’t been kind to the man,

her rays coloring him more aged than before.

Even now, his shoulders positioned heavy,

pointing to the gravel in front of him.

It’s hard to say when the man last consumed anything;

hunger and thirst

carved into his ankles.

One could pick him up from under the ribcage,

there being such a step between his chest and hips.

His lips were cracked and bloody –

thinned enough to suggest there was nothing there at all.

Yet despite this,

these lips crooked into a smile;

his dried eyelids twitching,

open and shut.

Art by Sean Bergin



3 responses to “J’ai Faim/J’ai Soif”

  1. I like your writing style. It’s somehow sharp and still retains softness.. (I am sorry, I can’t seem to describe it any other way.) And I love how you work in images with the poem. I am curious, does the poem come first or the image?

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    1. Thanks! I really appreciate the feedback! Whenever I work on anything, I always start with the words themselves. Usually it kinda takes me a little while to determine the right kind of image for the job.

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      1. You’re welcome! I asked because it made me wonder about reversing the process, you know, non-verbal (image) to verbal (the poem.)

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